Blake's stories and poems

I'll make sure to fix some of those things. Thanks for the advice it's very helpful! Also the characters do indeed have an accent, however the "Mabey" was just me ...

Sorry, this was an accidental copy. Of the same review, if anyone here is a mod feel free to take this comment down, thanks.

Thanks! I'll try to fix some issues in just a moment.

Thanks for the advice! I'll fix some of those issues in just a moment. Also the reason the dialogue is in brackets is it was to imply translation (sorry I ...

Good use of repetition in every other line, the repetition is also added upon by the way you change the meaning of the same sentence in each repeated line. The ...

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This is a very creative concept for a poem and very well executed. It reminds me a lot of a list poem. I'm not sure if you were intentionally make ...

Thank you for the response! This was very helpful, I'm going to go over the story in just a moment and fix the things mentioned.

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This is a pretty good poem that, the style reminds me a lot of nocturnes and aubades, mostly aubades. The rhyme scheme is good and constant across the six stanzas ...

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There is a good rhyme scheme to this and also good uses of repetition. There is also good use of form as well with with each stanza having a consistent ...

There are some great uses of rhyme scheme and also good uses of repetition. There is also good use of form as well with with each stanza having a consistent ...